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You did a good job with the falling snow. The white acrylic paint daubs were very successful. Your shading also seems fine, and is consistent. I think the biggest point you need to work on is anatomy. In that first panel, Caleb's head seems kind of squashed in. The hands also need work in their structure. The fingers are okay, but the connection of the hand to the arm just doesn't seem right. Personally, I think the whole way they're holding hands is a little odd, considering they're using their outer arms. I would also like to see a little more expression on the character's faces, specifically Caleb's. Camille has expression, but Caleb seems pretty unchanged throughout the whole thing. And I had a difficult time establishing that they were lying down. You might want to add some shadows on the snow to get that more across.
Otherwise, this is a very nice and pretty piece! Keep up the good work!
Otherwise, this is a very nice and pretty piece! Keep up the good work!